Apr 2

Quake Herd RP: Part 1🌩

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Okay guys here it is (sorry for the long wait). Anyways, just so we're on the same page, here's a list of rules and what not that are commonly used on most RPs on here:

 

  • Please write the RP comments from a third person prospective (i.e. Star trotted out into the meadow)

  • When you write an RP comment, please put the name of the character you are using at the start (i.e. Lunarstorm: or Solorray-)

  • When you want to comment something that is not an RP comment, please put in parenthesis so we can avoid confusion

  • Don't start tying when you can see someone else is because the MB tends to glitch for table and phone users

  • Keep things G or PG (I'm not really worried about this one)

  • Don't play as other people's character unless they have given you permission

  • DO NOT SPAM COMMENTS!!!!

  • And most impotently, have fun

 

That's about it for the rules, but here's the lead up story just incase you for got something:

About 250 years before Star was born, there was an up rising in Anok. A stallion named Quakefire believed that he should become the over-stallion of all the herds, and tried to convince other steeds of this with a surprising amount of success. He managed to get around 500 steeds from various herds to follow him, and leave their territories to live with him in the trap.

Once Quakefire had gathered what he thought were enough steeds, he decided the best way to achieve his goal of over-stallion of Anok, he lead an attack on Mountain Herd, witch was the weakest of the herds at the time (they were recovering from an incredibly destructive illness). The battle was vicious, but members of the defending herd were able to send messengers asking for help to the other herds. Then with a massive combined force, the herds of Anok rained down with furry on Quakefire and his followers. Fatally wounding the traitorous stallion in the process.

When the dust from the battle settled, only 100 or so of Quakefire's followers remained. They begged for forgiveness, but the other herds wouldn't have it. And as a punishment for their betrayal it was decided that the lot of them would be exiled from western Anok forever, and were sent into the interior of Anok. So as time went on, the herds forgot about the exiled steeds, assuming that they had died out.

But that was far from the truth. Despite all odds, the banished steeds, now calling themselves Quake Herd (as a reminder of the mistake they made) survived. Now 250 years later, they inhabit the most eastern part of Anok, and have all but forgotten about the other winged steeds, and are focusing on their day to day life. But what challenges face this loaner herd? Can they continue to defy all odds? Or will everything come crashing down?

 

I would like to put an emphasis on the fact the Quake Herd characters have had no interaction with the other herds in over 250 years, and actually most of the steeds think they are just a myth. Therefore, at least at the moment, I would prefer it if references to what happens in TGH to a minim.

 

Lastly, if you are a member who didn't know about this RP till now, fill free to add your characters description here.

 

-Quake Herd Members-

Over-Stallion: Blackwing

Lead Mare: Briarcloud

Medicine Mare: (open)

Captains: Bravefire, Rainfire, Strongfire

Battle Mare Captains: (open) Hollyfire, Stormfire

Stallions: (open) Solarray, Aspenstorm, Frostweed, Hazeltwist

Mares: (open) Lunarstorm, Moonfrost, Brightfrost, Shellmist, Ambersnip, Applefly

Yearlings: (open) Hawkstride

Foals: (open)

 

 

( YAAAASSSS!!!!!! :D :D :D :D )

Frostweed-

The young stallion rested in a tree's branches, dozing soundly. He was perched on a thick branch, much like a panther stalking its prey, and his wings drooped at his sides, nearly brushing the ground below him.

It was remotely peaceful, foals playing here and there. He would become a stallion in a year or just 6 months, as he was 3 1/2. He would have to start training to become a spy, sky herder, or a battle stallion. He wasn't sure if there was another job, just as he remembered he could train to be a flight-school teacher. He grimaced at the thought of taking the young mare's job he knew to be named Jadeleaf. (Side character, not actual character just a name XD. Is that allowed? If not I will gladly change this comment)

He suddenly felt a sharp tug on his left wing, lost balance, and landed in a heap on the ground. He groaned and looked up to see his sister, a yearling named Shellmist, peering down at him.

"Frostweed, you promised you'd fly through the trees with me today!" She snorted. Frostweed rolled his eyes in a playful manner and stood up, shaking out his dark brown coat.

"How about. . . . We fly through the trees, to the beach, around twilight so we can get the best view of the stars," he said with a coltish (Originally boyish, but since he isn't a human boy,I put coltish XD) grin softening his features.

Shellmist eyed him up and down, trying to detect any flaws in this plan. Finally, she gave in and sighed. "Alright. At twilight," she muttered. Frostweed smiled and nuzzled his sister's neck.

"If you don't mind, I'm gonna try to catch some Z's before then, so I'd appreciate it if you'd consider going and playing somewhere else," he said as he flopped up into the tree on unsteady wings. He landed hard on his left hind leg and resisted the urge to yelp. He slowly adjusted himself, wings tucked this time, until he was in a comfortable position and dozed off.

Apr 2

(Side characters are fine, but pegasi become full grown stallions/mares at age 2, also it would be under-stallion, not battle stallion)

( WOAH. THAT WAS LONG. I apologize xd )

Apr 2

Lunarstorm-

The pretty palomino mare was grazing somewhat near, but out of earshot of Frostweed and his sister. She was next to her younger-by-a-minuet brother, Solorray, who was flicking his tail irritably at a couple flies that were buzzing around him.

"How come you never get flies?" grumbled the grayish stallion.

Lunarstorm snorted, amused, "Guess I'm just special." she quipped.

Just then, the pair heard a thud of a Pegasus touching down behind them, and turned around.

Apr 3

(Btw I love the map!)

Apr 3

Hollyfire -

She stretched her fiery black wings and yawned, jumping into the light sky. Her shiny dappled red gold coat flashed like fire in the sky, her mane and tail getting whipped by the strong winds on the interior. Hollyfire cruised in the sky, searching for danger and other things that could potentially harm her herd.

Applefly:

Applefly covered her face with her honey colored wings. She was doing everything wrong! So terribly wrong! The Medicine Cave was in an absolute mess, with none of the herbs in the right place or even sorted. And it was all her fault! She knew that she would have to be the sole Medicine Mare eventually, but not this soon. Applefly wasn’t ready to take care of 700 (how many are in Quake Herd?) pegasi and their needs. She wasn’t responsible enough.

She cried silently into her wings, her tears leaking into her feathers. If Cherryroot was here, she would tell her apprentice, “Chin up! You’ve got me to help!” But the problem was that Cherryroot wasn’t here. She had disappeared 4 moons ago, without a trace. Just like everyone else that Applefly loved. And it was all her fault!

The dark brown mare wiped her eyes, but continued to work, sorting through the piles of herbs. She wouldn’t- couldn’t-disappoint Cherryroot, now that she was gone. Applefly would work through this. She could do this.

Encouraging herself didn’t help stop the tears though.

Apr 3

(around 700 seems like a descent number)

(thanks for making a map! Im guessing the two different MM caves are for when the herd migrates?

Where is the herd now and what time of year is it?)

Apr 3

(Yes, that's why there are two, and I was thinking this would be early/midish summer)

(@Dragon got it. Thanks for replying back so soon! And by the way, are you ok with Cherryroot and all that?)

( I was about to ask what season it was too XD )

( Also I absolutely love your writing style )

(thank you very much!!! Yours is also awesome too!!!!)

Apr 3Edited: Apr 3

Moonfrost:

Moonfrost soared through the sky the wind whipping through her mane, she was a mare who loved doing all sorts of maneuvers in the sky. she was soaring over the trees as she thought, I have always wondered what lies beyond our borders? But she knew not to ask for her parents had told her that it was a dangerous place out there, for both her parents died from a Boa Constrictor shortly after they crossed the border that divided the herd of pegasi from whatever lies inthe Outlands as she called it.

She reason why she called it the Outlands is because it seems like a very dangerous place.

When Moonfrost was done flying, she landed on a soft meadow and began to graze.

(I did my best i'm only used to roleplaying on like Animal Jam and games like that)

Apr 3

(If that's anything like RPing on Roblox I can see how theses are different, but don't worry, you did fine)

Apr 3Edited: Apr 3

(@Dragon Thanks :) ! And it kinda is like RPing on Roblox)

stormflower
Apr 3

Briarcloud:

the mare lightly touched her muzzle to the surface of echo river, but yanked it back as she let out a moan “why do foals have to kick.” She stumbled a little before regaining her balance, Briarcloud raised her head as an dark grey mare trotted over to her and settled by her side “are you okay?” She gently whisperd “i’m Fine, i’ts just that it is a little hard to hold on to such a big secret.” She quietly wondered if it had been such a good idea to tell her sister, but she needed somebody to talk to, she had belived that her sister was the only one that she could talk to.

Brightfrost :

Brightfrost flapped her light green wings her eyes looking down for inturders . She herd the soft hum ofa pegsi wings beside her. She did not have to look to tell who it was. ¨Hello Aspenstorm ¨. Brightfrost said still keeping her eyes down.¨ Hello Brightfrost¨ Aspenstorm aswenerd. Brightfrost sigded . ¨What do you want Aspenstrom ?¨¨ Nothing I just want to annoy you becuase its fun¨ Aspenstorm replied. ¨ You doing a very good job then .¨ Brightfrost responed sacacstily. just ingore him she thought . he will not bother you if you ingore him . Well Brightfrost thought ingoreing him is not working should I just talk to him? Brightfrost did not reazile she was staring at Aspenstorm for the last 10 minutes . Brightfrost and Aspenstorms eyes met for 2 seconds and then they both looked away embarssed .

Apr 3

Lunarstorm-

She and Solorray recognized Moonfrost as the pegasi who had just landed, and the twins trotted over to the mare. "How it going?" nickered Lunarstorm

Moonfrost-

Moonfrost noticed the pegasi who had just trotted up to her "Good, hows it going with you two?" she answered back

Apr 3

Solarray-

The stallion snorted, "I've not flies." he said, irritably as he swatted his tail at the big black bugs.

Lunarstorm rolled her eye, "He means were doing good." she said, "Though it has been pretty quiet around here lately."

Apr 3

Hollyfire-

Hollyfire touched down near the lead mare and a few other mares and stallions. She dipped her head respectively towards Briarcloud and began to graze on the sweet, emerald grasses.

 

Moonfrost-

"It's true it has been quite around here lately, I don't have a good feeling about it, although I do get pretty nervous when it gets quiet, but this is different." Moonfrost replied

Stormfire-

The pretty grullo mare heard some of her friends talking and trotted over. She greeted Solarray, Moonfrost, and Lunarstorm.

"How's it going?" she asked while watching Hollyfire land and the next shift leave.

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