Migrating Dusk
By Jonathan E
The splash of moon across their backs,
Not venturing from the beaten track.
Their formation wanders to and fro,
Not wishing to be caught by the driving snow.
Wings go up, wings go down;
Calls fill the night all around.
I see them disappear into the dusk,
I want not to look away,
But I know I must.
Zebras
By Jonathan E
Horses of Africa calmly graze,
As they have done for many days.
Their zigzag patterns make them unique,
Opposite colors, soft and sleek.
Wow
thanks, and yes these are mine
Cool
Fyi, I didn't write these for the message board specifically, I wrote them like two or three years ago and just found them.
So cool!!!!
Those are really good. You have a true gift. I'm terrible at poetry!
Thanks, but you shouldn't say you're terrible at it. Can you post one of yours to reply to this?
I can't even get any poetic ideas into one piece (+ I'm homeschooled), so I don't have any poetry
OK
Those are really great Flamefrost!!!! I love writing poetry too!
I love poetry, but i like drawing better. hehe
I wish I could draw better. All of my stuff turns out looking weird. Like I can never get both eyes to have the same expression. I don't know how you guys do it!!
Dude, I really love the zebra poem! Pls...teach me your ways...
Well, I'm not sure how to explain it, but Robert Frost is. "All the fun's in how you say a thing."
Jessica, I’m not great with facial expressions either
Me too! I always get the wings and eyes wrong. Art is not my strong suit...
Yeah, I usually have a vision of how I want it to look. That is never produced.
Aw, that's to bad.
these are great!!
Useless Quiz Question:
If you were a zebra, would you be white with black stripes or black with white stripes?
Black with white stripes.