Sorry it took me so long to make guys, anyways, here's the last comment (well, technically comments) from part 2-
Dovefrost:
Dovefrost was on her way back to the foals when she was Bakari and then she grabbed him and put him on her back next to Vida, "No more doing stupid things to save each other!" She shouted to them. Vida laughed, "Yes mother I don't want to ever have to put them in that position again." Her voice was drenched in pain. Her leg was damaged and her side was bleeding.
Vida:
She winced, every turn her mother made caused her to have to hold in a shriek. She pretended that her grimaces were smiles. "So Bakari, how are you doing?" Her heart rate sped up and her breathing started to hurry and she started to pant.
Kifo:
Kifo set her on the ground and stayed beside her. He was tired and hungry but he would not leave her. When he heard Foxspark's words he realed back and said. "You Have To Heal Her!"
Foxspark:
Foxspark heard the call of the leadmare and he started running back to camp, he had been grabbing tasty moss. He looked at the wound and he said in a low sure voice said. "Marlcloud, I can't heal that..... Neather can you. We need Shimmerstream, please fly over to Willow herd and get her. Have Bakari or someone handle the herd."
Marlcloud:
She turned her head to Kifo, who had shouted her name. She reared in surprise. How could one of them be hurt so badly?! A normal lead-mare would be banished or sentenced to treason for such an accident. Luckily, though, she wasn’t a normal lead-mare.
Marlcloud didn’t recognize the filly, but she instantly knew that the filly had received her gift from the Stars. “Foxspark! You and I both know what to do, now go do it!” She hissed, already putting lots of pressure upon the wound to stanch the blood flow.
(NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! I gtg! Bye! I is soo disapointed. :()
Kifo:
Kifo gently used his wings to go under her body and carry her, He walked back to camp. "Marlcloud!" He said as loud as he could without waking her up. Her body was badly torn and he needed his mother to help.
Jeray:
Hearing her name being said, Jeray looked up into a young stallions face. "I- I am. I need... help." The filly's face was etched in pain as she drifted into unconsciousness. (Yay, i spelled it right!)
(ooo, do i think what it is to think?)
Kifo:
Kifo lept into the air and darted to the sound and he saw a filly. He landed and said gently, "What happened, you must be Jeray aren't you?" He saw the wound and was sorry for her, She was very pretty and he could not help noticing it.
Frayan:
Frayan galloped after Raphael; frothing already. His heart was beating wildly out of fear of who it might be... hoping with all his heart that it would not be his sister.
Raphael
Raphael hears the distress call and sprints towards the sound. “Come on, brothers!”
Frayan:
Frayan's head jerked up from grazing, sure that he heard something. "Did anyone hear that?" The young stallion cried, not talking to anyone in particular. Another scream erupted from the direction in the Trap. What was any doing in there?
Jeray:
The yearling filly bucked, fortunately throwing off the panther. Jeray took that chance and bolted away; not caring where she went, only just to get away. Her back throbbed painfully as blood streamed down her shoulders, leaving a trail of red behind. The dark gray filly galloped as fast as she could; dodging trees as she tried to escape. But the obstacles were slowing her down as she went deeper into the forest. Jeray shrieked in fright as the panther gained on her with ease, leaping from branch to branch. Then immediately, just as the cat leaped off a branch to land on her back; her force bubble erupted out of instinct, surrounding her comfortably. The unfortunate panther hit the bubble hard. It rolled off the shield, too stunned to do anything. Jeray's shield popped, (or disappeared, or whatever. XD) as she stood as still as stone. Shocked, yet still having some sense in her, she edged away from the conscious, yet too stupid to do anything, panther. Jeray loped in pain from the cat; tears streaming down her face. It seemed minutes until the pain became too unbearable for the filly to go on. She stumbled, hitting the ground with a thud. Suddenly, Jeray lifted her head, and cried, "Help! Someone please HELP ME!"
Jeray:
Jeray walked deeper into the Trap, sticking to the deer trail. Her wings lolled along with her steps, her head swagging; like the horses when they walked. Jeray breathed in the deep piney smell of the dense forest, enjoying her stroll in the Trap. The yearling looked back, the opening long behind her. She didn't care much, as long as she stayed on the trail. Patches of light burst through the gaps of entangled branches; making the dew on the spiderwebs sparkle like the stones of a beach. Jeray stopped, closing her eyes; just for a moment, she thought as her mind drifted away.
A sudden loud snap pierced her ears, awaking her with a jerk. The sound had com from behind her. Jeray's heart thudded uncontrollably; she didn't dare turn around. The filly felt a sudden itching to fly, to get away from whatever was behind her. Jeray waited, waiting for something to happen. But nothing came. Finally, she gave in; Jeray turned her head slowly. Two yellow eyes glowed from the darkness. Suddenly, a huge black cat lounged out and landed on Jeray's back; the filly's scream echoed throughout the forest.
Marlcloud:
She tucked her wings and listened to the heated murmurings and the excitement emanating from the foals. She silenced them with one look to Iden. “I do not think you are ready. Perhaps, once more of you have achieved your power from the Stars, then I will allow you to go. But, now, it is too risky. If you are willing to be patient, than you will go in due time.” She wasn’t meaning to sound harsh, but she was genuinely concerned for the safety of her foals.
Vida:
"Yes, we should. Lets send Foxspark, Thea and some of the others, like Dovefrost to Willow herd, Kifo, Frayan and Iden can go to Sky herd and Me, Jerry, And Silren can go to Ash herd. Deal? Marlcloud? Bakari and Anblick and Bumbleberry and Merlcloud can stay here?"
Iden:
Once everyone was gathered, she spoke.
"I want to go scout the other herds. I have a feeling that if we know what is happening, we can be better prepared." She said simply. She had a big announcement but little to say.
Bumbleberry:
Bumbleberry glared at Bakari. "Be Nice! I am coming with you." He stated calmly. He was used to being loved and Bakari had shown that was the farthest thing from his mind.
Vida:
Vida dropped her head concerned what Iden was going to say.
Kifo:
Kifo heard the call and said sharply, "Everyone gather someone needs to speak."
( XDDDDDD. I didn’t think this would happen when I first created him lol. )
Bakari:
“Why would I lie to you when I have no lies left worth telling?” He muttered to Bumbleberry. It couldn’t even be considered a snap, because it was so lifeless and dull even the trees cringed. He liked the trees. They were reliable, and they had amazing stories to tell, and he’d always listen.
“What do you need, Bumbleberry? I have to find someone, and I don’t have a lot of time,” he snorted, perking his ears at the powerful bray he assumed had come from Marlcloud.
Iden:
"We better get back." she said ignoring Vida's comment. "Plus, I uh. I have an announcement to make."
She took a deep breath and called for Shadow Herd to meet in the clearing. The call went for a mile or two so she hoped everyone heard her.
Anblick:
He chuckled, happy that he had some adopted brothers. He'd never had siblings before, so it felt good to have colts his age he could talk too. He noticed Bumbleberry talking to Bakari, who looked distraught and sad. Unblock didn't have enough courage to ask the older colt about it though, so he backed off and waited till Bumbleberry returned. "Wait...if Bakari is here...then where's Thea?" He thought, his eyes immediately flashed towards the sky. He scanned the horizon, but the thick trees blocked most of his view and he frowned-not liking the fact that Thea was on her own.