Breezecloud replied immediately. “I don’t think we’re on the same wing here,” she said. “I understood that we would continue flight school for at least a total of five lessons, then let them volunteer to take part in the fighting. Not switch immediately into army training. Were you thinking of something different, Mistcloud?”
Magicpetal was the last triplet to awake and she yawned. She saw Silverflame, Breezebell, Redmoon, and her two siblings chattering together. She stood up and shook the leaves out of her mane and tail and trotted toward her friends. "Hi!" she nickered, cheerfully
(It may have been weeks, but this will be only the second flight school lesson we have commented about)
Horizongold trotted out to the main clearing, closely followed by Oceangold. “Flight school students!” he called to get their attention. “As you may know, Flame Herd has formed an army. This may lead to war between our herds. So we need to make sure Flame Herd isn’t expecting our skills. Soon, I don’t know when, a select few of you will have the opportunity to join the army and fight. Others of you may become spies. But to do all this, we need to be able to fly well. Let’s go to the apple field!” He led the charge into the overcast sky to the field.
(Fair, but I want to finish this flight school session first. Then, when we finish, Mistcloud comes out to tell them that they can switch to battle training.)
(???? The yearlings can’t be in two places at once. Unless you mean the adult army members are training, which is happening even though we haven’t commented about it.)
( XD I think she means that when they start to train in the army, they also taught flying skills )
Redmoon: She turned her head to Horizongold and Oceangold and flew after them to the orchard. She landed hard and stumbled forward and grunted. Breezebell landed very easily but didn't notice her sister fall. Embermoon flew to the orchard too. SHe landed beside the other Flight School Instructors.
When Bronzewing called for all the flight school yearlings to follow him to the orchard, his heart leaped for joy. Silverflame jumped into the air, and quickly followed after the other yearlings, flight instructors, and council steeds.
Magic[etal jumped into the sky, followed by Emberblaze. They landed in the orchard and Magicpetal noticed Stromglade on the other side of the gathering yearlings. "Good. That's were he belongs." she mumbled, she remembered her promise to herself and looked forward at Oceangld and her aunt
(Several times has Horizongold talked to him and told him to go and apoligize to Magicpetal, but he's refused and acts very bored and inconsiderate when it comes to flight school)
When all the yearling, and those who had followed them to the orchard had all arrived, Mistcloud kicked off and hovered above the gathered steeds, accompanied by the rest of the council steeds. "Everyone, may I please have your attention?" called Mistcloud, "As Oceangold mentioned, we will be training yearling to join the Army. But to do so we must evaluate the yearlings, so we know where to start their training." the council mare paused to let that sink in, "We have set up a course a short distance from her that will test the yearling's abilities at leadership, agility, and teamwork. We will be sending in groups of twelve yearlings at a time, and they will be closely monitored by battle mares and under-stallions who are scattered through out the course."
Breezecloud replied immediately. “I don’t think we’re on the same wing here,” she said. “I understood that we would continue flight school for at least a total of five lessons, then let them volunteer to take part in the fighting. Not switch immediately into army training. Were you thinking of something different, Mistcloud?”
(it's been like weeks since Mistcloud returned, they have had time to do more lessons in flight school)
(But, I feel like it isn't very fair to Flamefrost. I mean, they only had one lesson.)
Magicpetal was the last triplet to awake and she yawned. She saw Silverflame, Breezebell, Redmoon, and her two siblings chattering together. She stood up and shook the leaves out of her mane and tail and trotted toward her friends. "Hi!" she nickered, cheerfully
(It may have been weeks, but this will be only the second flight school lesson we have commented about)
Horizongold trotted out to the main clearing, closely followed by Oceangold. “Flight school students!” he called to get their attention. “As you may know, Flame Herd has formed an army. This may lead to war between our herds. So we need to make sure Flame Herd isn’t expecting our skills. Soon, I don’t know when, a select few of you will have the opportunity to join the army and fight. Others of you may become spies. But to do all this, we need to be able to fly well. Let’s go to the apple field!” He led the charge into the overcast sky to the field.
(We could just say that the yearlings have been going to flight school, we just haven't spent anytime with it)
(Fair, but I want to finish this flight school session first. Then, when we finish, Mistcloud comes out to tell them that they can switch to battle training.)
(Gtg)
(Hmm... maybe they could do flight school lessons, and have army training at the same time)
(???? The yearlings can’t be in two places at once. Unless you mean the adult army members are training, which is happening even though we haven’t commented about it.)
( XD I think she means that when they start to train in the army, they also taught flying skills )
Redmoon: She turned her head to Horizongold and Oceangold and flew after them to the orchard. She landed hard and stumbled forward and grunted. Breezebell landed very easily but didn't notice her sister fall. Embermoon flew to the orchard too. SHe landed beside the other Flight School Instructors.
(Yeah, they could be getting advanced flight training, and battle training at the same time)
Silverflame:
When Bronzewing called for all the flight school yearlings to follow him to the orchard, his heart leaped for joy. Silverflame jumped into the air, and quickly followed after the other yearlings, flight instructors, and council steeds.
Magic[etal jumped into the sky, followed by Emberblaze. They landed in the orchard and Magicpetal noticed Stromglade on the other side of the gathering yearlings. "Good. That's were he belongs." she mumbled, she remembered her promise to herself and looked forward at Oceangld and her aunt
(Who's Stormglade?)
(A large bay yearling that comes from Ice herd. He bullies Magicpetal and any other yearlings.)
(Several times has Horizongold talked to him and told him to go and apoligize to Magicpetal, but he's refused and acts very bored and inconsiderate when it comes to flight school)
(Oh yeah, think I remember hearing something about him)
(yep)
Mistcloud:
When all the yearling, and those who had followed them to the orchard had all arrived, Mistcloud kicked off and hovered above the gathered steeds, accompanied by the rest of the council steeds. "Everyone, may I please have your attention?" called Mistcloud, "As Oceangold mentioned, we will be training yearling to join the Army. But to do so we must evaluate the yearlings, so we know where to start their training." the council mare paused to let that sink in, "We have set up a course a short distance from her that will test the yearling's abilities at leadership, agility, and teamwork. We will be sending in groups of twelve yearlings at a time, and they will be closely monitored by battle mares and under-stallions who are scattered through out the course."
Emberblaze's wings buzzed. He's always wanted to join the army, now was his chance. He stretched his wings and waited for further instructions.
Magicpetal, who wasn't a fighter, didn't really want to join the Army. She took one step back and swallowed hard.