1.
The main character is a mare named Renaya. She was picked by one of the princesses to be her pet. She is the daughter of a pegasus and a land horse, but she didnt get the wings.
One day her mother slipped out of the stable and ran off, she met a charming horse, who promised to protect her, but as her pregnancy developed the land walkers searched for and recaptured her.
When Renaya was born, everyone was shocked that she didnt have wings, but that only made the princess want her more, now she is the unwilling inside pet of the princess, conctaltly searching for an escape
2.
This story is about a young pegasus mare named Riverstorm, who was born into River herd right after star's death, she was born a dud, and her mother had prayed that the new colt of star would save her daughter, but, the colt was the destroyer, and turned on the herd, ruling by fear and force, instead of mercy
Which would you rather read?
The first
The second
I voted first, but I have to say that I freaking LOVE the name Riverstorm. 😍
Hmm...this is tough! Both sound really interesting, especially the first, since I love the idea of trying to escape,. But like Morning pointed out, you don't see the destroyer leader.
the second for sure (I like the first one but I really like the second one)
Both of those ideas sound great, but the second one is more appealing to me! We don’t usually get to see herd life run by a destroyer, and Riverstorm’s perspective would be very interesting as, being a dud, she would be similar to a black foal herself.