Jan 18

Light dreams chapter: 3 (storm flowers point of wiew)


Storm flower did not want to look down so instead she looked up seeking the comforting light of the moon, but the moon was blood red just like the grass, she trembled in fear.

She closed her eyes - after a while she opened them and she stared at the ground stunned now the grass was not only blood red but also littered with bones, she was completely stunned when she heard a scream of pain, “Hello, is anyone there?” Her words soon became echoes, which made no sense since she stood on a field “weird.” she mumbled to her self, then she heard again and this time she was sure, her hoves were thundering over the earth with amazing speed, she was just about to scream for help when she saw it, her mother and her farther was battling a large dark grey stallion, four other Pegasi was helping them a silver mare with violet feather a strange black stallion a chestnut mare with blue wings and a brown stallion with orange feathers, but one thing she was sure of they were helping, the large grey stallion was fast and strong he aplied new wounds to every steed around him, in a spilt of a seacond he had storm flower’s mother pinned to the ground Siren cloud screamed in anger and fear, she twisted her head to look right at her, “no, you will not have her!” the stallion did not have time to answer, before the chestnut mare rammed him, the stallion got up clearly upset when he looked her way and froze “Grand daugther.” he houghed in delight, before everything faded into black, “ wake up!” a voice nickerd Meadow stood over her “cold hearts incoming.”

that got her attention she stood up and raddled her feathers “where?” She quickly added “how many,” she already knew the answer ”all of them,“ storm flower decided that she meadow heart just could fly away. “to late,” meadow heart grumbled, four fillies were trotting towards them ”oh see who it is the Queen of hindquarters and lost foal,the same place the same time,” a mocking voice said “oh shut up Jade feather,” snow dove the leader of the group houghed in amusment “oh sorry lost foal did we touch a weak point,” a red filly that storm flower hated paticularly “well that is what you expect from a land horse,” the dark brown filly that stood next to the red foal was dying of laughter when she was done she said “ good one Flower glade,” in one seacond storm flower remembered her “Dazzle dream?” Dazzle dream just ignored her “ Flower glade how was it to crush Falcon chrash‘s heart,” that was to much for storm flower “I guess why you call him Falcon chrash, is because your brains are to little to understand his real name,” Flower glade did not looked pleased “ no sweetie it’s because that name suits him better,” all the fillies laugthed and then left - all the foals that we’re going on the journey were ready to take of.




Jan 18

I want to thank Cora leaf for the name jade feather dragon for the name Flower glade and bright berry for the name snow dove thanks guys

Jan 19
Top Comment

No problem, I'm happy to help, plus I really like your story

Jan 19

Thank you i an going to write the next chapter today i Can not WAIT

Jan 19

And i have a feeling that you know who the other pegasi from the dream was ?


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