stormflower
Feb 9

i start a revolution while playing murder mystery / mini stories chapter:7

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Sirenvoice tried to use her brain while walking down to the place where the blood of Goldenlight had been shed only a day ago, somehow that place seemed familiar like she had been there before, she collected her thoughts into a bundle that focused on two things the murder of the golden colt and Shadowpath's parents. Finally it dawned on her Morningelaf and Star wasn't Shadowpath's parents, Morningleaf had left Star to find Brackentail when she came back empty handed they heard of Bloodwing that was roaming the interior Anok " and if Oneeye left with me, the story most be fake and the only one that could have sired Shadowpath was Nightwing." she mumbled her result to her self, she needed to tell this to someone but there was one more thing, why had Goldenlight blocked the blow from Sleek, she knew that foals loved there siblings it was not that. Goldenlight had been controlled by a spirit, the small smile when he blocked the attack. She was ripped out of her mind when a voice spoke "Sirenvoice." she looked up at Darkstone and Wintertale "yes." they both looked worried and angry "we have a problem." the group of mares walked down to the lake to get a drink "you know that your mother have written a knew chapter in anok's history." Sirenvoice nodded, Spiralcloud had made the Starling colony that was made that housed the wounded the elderly the pregnant mares and the foals that was to young to fight " we could make our own revolution!" Wintertale burst out, Sirenvoice started to think maybe it wasn't a bad idea "maybe." she mumbled her self but Darkstone had pretty good ears " you could be our leader Sirenvoice." she looked down "no, I think Darkstone should do it." Darkstone looked confused " why i'm the daughter of two tyrants." Wintertale trotted over to Darkstone " to show everyone that our destiny isn't carved in stone." Sirenvoice understood that Darkstone was afraid and she deeply respected that "hope is something that is not reserved for the one that has the power, its anything and everyones light in the darkness." Sirenvoice quoted one of her dam's speaches trying to restrain the tears that followed that line "but my mom would stop me." Sirenvoice sighed "that is not your mother." Wintertale and Darkstone eyes was dark with confusion "that was Shardflower or my step mother, everyone that Bloodwing trust get a power to take control over another beings body." Wintertale looked like she was trying to understand "so you are saying that Smokecloud is not really Smokecloud." Sirenvoice tried to see what was laying behind Darkstone's mask "it was Shardflower all along, she told Goldenlight to take the blow, because that tree was a power point for spirit energy my dad is working together with Mist to kill Silvershine that place to activate the spirit energy and release one special Pegasi my mom." Wintertale looked ready to explode " and shard flower wants to stop this, but let me guess other spirits could also be released like Petalcloud." Sirenvoice nodded agreeing with the white mare.

 

 

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