Nov 24, 2017

Honeyfall's Story 20


"So who's Pebblefrost's sire?" asked Honeyfall.

"Coldfire, obviously." answered Snowfrost.

"Who's Coldfire?" asked Honeyfall

Snowfrost stared at her clearly shocked, "Your telling me you don't know who Coldfire is?"

Honeyfall shrugged "Sorry, no."

Snowfrost sighed, "Coldfire is Snow Herd's best captain. He has never lost a fight, he always completes missions, and according to the mare's he's the best looking stallion in all of Anok."

"Oh." said Honeyfall, "Sorry I didn't know."

"I guess you shouldn't, you are from Sun Herd." said Snowfrost.

There was a long pause, "I heard what happened to your parents, I'm really sorry." said Snowfrost.

Honeyfall looked at the ground, tears welled up in her eyes, "Why should you be sorry?" she snapped, "You weren't there, you couldn't have helped. Even if you were, there was no saving them. They died trying save Sun Herd, all because Thunderwing," she spat the over stallion's name out, "didn't kill the stupid black foal."

"S-sorry, I didn't..." Snowfrost tried to calm Honeyfall down, but it was to late for that, Honeyfall ran off in the direction Willowfrost had gone in.

Honeyfall almost ran into the mare.

"Hay, slow down there." said Willowfrost, "What happened?"

"I don't want to talk about it." said Honeyfall, tears rolled down her checks."

Willowfrost wrapped her wings around the bay filly, "Calm down, there's no need to make a big thing about this."

Honeyfall blinked tears from her eyes, "He mentioned my parents, and I kinda snapped at him."



Willowfrost let out a long breath, "I see."

"Willowfrost, what if I snap like that every time someone mentions them?"

"That's a problem for the future, but right now I think you need sleep."

Honeyfall looked at the mare, "Are you mad?"

"No, but come on, Ashberry is waiting for you." Willowfrost led Honeyfall over to her foster mother...

Nov 24, 2017

Okay, better length, and this is awesome

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