When Riverblaze saw the dapple-grey stallion, she flew straight up, screaming. What she didn’t know, was that six other stallions were waiting for her at the top. The second they spotted her they bit her wings. Riverblaze thrashed and kicked. She managed to kick one of the stallions in the leg. He cried out in pain, letting go of her wing. The other stallion still biting her wing couldn’t hold her weight and let go. When he did, Riverblaze tried to fly away, but there was just too many of them!
They circled her.
“You're coming with us, little filly,” the dapple grey said, and clacked his teeth. He snapped at Riverblaze, and bit her wing. Another stallion grabbed her other wing, and they carried her off. Riverblaze tried to twist free, but he kicked her in the shoulder, and the pain shocked her. They flew until they reached the Vein, and the stallions dropped her beside a crying filly. The filly’s eyes widened, and she bleated, but she couldn’t move forward, for there were two huge stallions guarding her.
Riverblaze glared at them. “Well I suppose your gonna guard me too, arn’t you,” she said, and squeezed past them to sit with the filly. “You okay?” Riverblaze asked her.
“I’m fine,” she said, “I’m just surprised they caught you too!
“Well,” said Riverblaze, “I was being stupid. My name’s Riverblaze, by the way.”
The filly nodded. “I’m Stormsun."
There it is!!! Hope you liked it, also, BTW, sorry that the chapters are so short, but when i type in Word, i try to make them 1 pg long.
It's 14, but you know how when you make a paragraph it makes a space between the 2 lines, anyway, that also takes up room
This is great! (Also, if you try to make them one page long, is the type size large?)
This is SO GOOD!!!!!!
Star – solid black stallion with black feathers, white star on forehead.
Morningleaf – chestnut mare with aqua feathers, flaxen mane and tail, four white socks, wide white blaze.
Summertail – chestnut appaloosa with black tipped teal feathers, black streaked flaxen mane and tail, three white socks, white star on forehead.
Riverblaze – black pinto with midnight blue feathers, black mane and tail, wide white blaze.
Stormsun – chestnut with turquoise feathers, curly black mane and tail that fades into light brown, four white socks, white blaze.