"I cant wait for tonight Nightleaf!" a filly called so excited. Tonight was the night she was going to finally be a true Bloodwolf. A Bloodwolf was a half-pegasus half-wolf. "Nightwish you need to be quiet. You cant go around announcing that your so excited. Pegasi will start wondering why your so excited." Nightleaf scolded. Nightwish looked up annoyed. "I don't understand why I cant tell Willowlake. She's my best friend." she complained.
"You cant tell her because it will endanger all Bloodwolf's." Nightleaf explained, "The moon is rising, get ready." As the moon rose above the trees Nightwish felt a change in herself. She felt the Bloodwolf power rushing through her body. Then Nightwish felt different, she glanced down and saw why. She was no longer a little filly, she was a she-wolf.
WOW THAT WAS AWSOME
Opps. I just noticed I mixed up the characters. Its supposed to be Willowlake that's Nightwish's friend not Willowbreeze
Thanks!!
WOWOWOWOOWOOW!!!!! THIS IS EPIC!!!!
Lol, yep
BTW, Flamefrost, I commented on Alternative Endings prt 9
Oh! Makes sense. Well, as much sense as fantasy books can ever make, that is.
WOW!! Super creative.
Thanks
Cool!
Stardust you do have a point, but I created this story so you can understand why Willowlake is evil and how she died. Of course there will be some pegasi deaths, but that's how I planned this. I want the deaths to be the other Over-stallions who are evil.
Well 'Full Moon' takes place before 'The Story of Phoenix' it will explain how Willowlake died, and why she's evil. I'll continue to write 'The Story of Phoenix' Thanks
I EVOL TI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ANOKIAN LANGUAGE YO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD I ekil taht aedi!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( Translation: I like that idea )
Cool story and I think a bloodwolf sounds cool! But what about your other story, The Story of Phoenix?
Dragon, I never said it wasn't creative. I'm talking about something else. Hope you understand. :)
I'm sorry Dragon, but that was kind of rude.
I didn't mean that it wasn't creative.
Just so you know, I think it's creative. It's just not my style, I guess. I'm not trying to be rude, I just wanted to give more to my answer.
I'm just saying, because wolves eat horses...Also, they don't mix. It's creative,but not my forte.
Pegasus turning into wolves.... Like what happens do they thirsty other animals blood?? It's just weird, because they are becoming something that has kill their own. So..Are they going to kill their kind? It's like pegasus have deer friends, and then the next month it's like sorry friend gotta eat.
Also, wouldn't there be fear?
What Dragon said! No offencem but if Pegasi can exist, why not Bloodwolves? Logic
And pegasi aren't? Anyways i think it is a very creative idea for a story Pananah, and i can't wait to read more
I'm not really sure about the pegasus/wolf hybrid...It just seems unrealistic.
However, this is an interesting story. :)